Writing Goals 1. Use an introduction technique 2. Use Transitions between body paragraphs 3. Limit the number of pronouns
Friday, October 22, 2010
Fruit
Fruit are wonderful thing there are healthy thing and lots of people enjoy it. Also fruit is grown natural and it fresh at the stores and markets. My favorite kind of fruit is watermelon, cantaloupe, tomatoes, and apples there are all healthy and good for you. If you don't like fruit your crazy and my opinion fruit can be good but some can be bad.
Thursday, October 21, 2010
Super Monkeys are a wonderful thing, they can do things that human only dream of doing. They can go into space with nothing on and it only takes 41:55 to get to the moon and back. They can also help people to because they can feed them and make things for humans that real human can't do. Also with there metal detector it can pick up anything it wants. Also he a game called Balloon Tower Defense. He is the most expensive and he does the most damage to the town. So that is Super Monkey and he does a lot of good stuff and bad stuff.
Wednesday, October 20, 2010
Patriotism
Patriotism
It’s a great feeling that you helped and supported your Country or anything else. Patriotism is more than just doing a few things, you wouldn't have to do a lot but help out your group. Also you can do some many other things to help. People should care about patriotism because it’s a time to love and support your country and the people risking their lives for our freedom.
Patriotism is a way to show you’re Country, Government, Political Association, and the Troops fighting. What you could do for your Country is that you can organize food drives, picking up trash, and doing things as little as that you can do to help your Country. You can do can things for your Government is that you could give them suggestions on how to help them in this bad economy. What you could do for the Political Association is that you can try to elect your favorite candidate and hope that they win and tell your neighbors to vote in the election. For the Troops over Seas and just in the U.S. you can send them medical supplies, food, and other things to help and support them in the wars, that there in.
This is what I think Patriotism means, it means to help out the people and businesses around you and other organisms around the world. So Patriotism is also a great time to show love and dedication for and to your country. My family is really patriotic because one of Grandpa's has been in wars; my Grandpa Krankanee had served in the Vietnam War. He was awarded the five star awards and that was a big thing for him and his family, so we have a lot of patriotism in our family. I also have a lot to learn about it but, I am glad for him to serve in the war and survive. That is what patriotism for me and the whole of my family.
So this is what patriotism is in the real world and the dedication to my family so it’s more than just a little thing it’s a huge thing. When you think of the troops think of patriotism and think about helping them.
It’s a great feeling that you helped and supported your Country or anything else. Patriotism is more than just doing a few things, you wouldn't have to do a lot but help out your group. Also you can do some many other things to help. People should care about patriotism because it’s a time to love and support your country and the people risking their lives for our freedom.
Patriotism is a way to show you’re Country, Government, Political Association, and the Troops fighting. What you could do for your Country is that you can organize food drives, picking up trash, and doing things as little as that you can do to help your Country. You can do can things for your Government is that you could give them suggestions on how to help them in this bad economy. What you could do for the Political Association is that you can try to elect your favorite candidate and hope that they win and tell your neighbors to vote in the election. For the Troops over Seas and just in the U.S. you can send them medical supplies, food, and other things to help and support them in the wars, that there in.
This is what I think Patriotism means, it means to help out the people and businesses around you and other organisms around the world. So Patriotism is also a great time to show love and dedication for and to your country. My family is really patriotic because one of Grandpa's has been in wars; my Grandpa Krankanee had served in the Vietnam War. He was awarded the five star awards and that was a big thing for him and his family, so we have a lot of patriotism in our family. I also have a lot to learn about it but, I am glad for him to serve in the war and survive. That is what patriotism for me and the whole of my family.
So this is what patriotism is in the real world and the dedication to my family so it’s more than just a little thing it’s a huge thing. When you think of the troops think of patriotism and think about helping them.
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