Writing Goals 1. Use an introduction technique 2. Use Transitions between body paragraphs 3. Limit the number of pronouns
Monday, June 4, 2012
Alligator
One day I had seen an animal in the sky flying from is magical carpet. But once he was so fat that he couldn't stay up in the air long. When Oscar the alligator looks up into the sky all he sees is toast, and that is all he thinks about. The toast is like the king of his world with jelly. So one day he looks up and it rains down toast and out of the toast come droppings of jelly and he gets so fat on that stuff that his magical carpet runs out of magic, so he has to get more magic from the store. Later that day he starts to lose his mind and talk to the toast maker but then he gets shot by the toast ruler, and now he is dead. The End.
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